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Fields in a storm !

Fields in a storm !

Photography Photography \ Nature | 06/09/07 @438 | dakoo | Comments critiques (81) | Views views (3030)


Fields in a storm !
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An IR shot !!



Would be grateful for as Frank / harsh a C&C as possible. ;)






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Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 06/09/07 @451

Just beautiful Rushi. Nice composition, exposure, and tones. Perhaps a bit more of the grasses showing below would balance this more.
 
Avatar Llogres

 06/09/07 @473

That's a really great shot! Did you try to flip the image horizontally? I think this would improve it a bit, because it would arrange the trees getting bigger with the "reading-direction". But I'm only a noob and stunned of that picture anyway ;)
 
Avatar dakoo

 06/09/07 @490

@ Michelle : Didn't do it because wanted to get the clouds taller on the rest of the scene. Thnx for the crit !!

@ Llogres : Good suggestion Llogres, didn't occur to me ! Now that i have tried it, it looks better this way considering the use of 2 trees for depth !
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 06/09/07 @501

A beautiful scene. Love the clouds! Perfect exposure and focus!
 
Avatar fumera

 06/09/07 @502

Aaaaah just beautiful. Like the angle. The cloud fields are amazing. Also the lighting. Great composition. Looks perfect to me. +9/9

It should be forbidden posting such shots without attaching a full version.
 
Avatar sdavis75

 06/09/07 @508

I think this is superb just the way it is. Very nice work! +10
 
Avatar Lisbeth

 06/09/07 @513

The color is very beautiful, my best like the clouds~
 
Avatar BETTAMER

 06/09/07 @521

Perfect..very nice
 
Avatar monjo

 06/09/07 @547

I agree with Steven. Excellent work Rushi!
John
 
Avatar zaclab

 06/09/07 @548

Amazing! Desktop version is Woow :) (thumbup) clouds and contrast & details.
Thank you :)
 
Avatar OnPix-Artist

 06/09/07 @553

Amazing composition ! +9
 
Avatar cupcake

 06/09/07 @569

Just beautiful Rushi.
It is so sharp.:)
Top Mark
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 06/09/07 @599

Amazing Rushi! I love the IR shots
nice composition. cool clouds details +10
 
Avatar Madanapale

 06/09/07 @619

Beautiful work!!.....The composition is great.....it flows the natural way the eye travels.
Excellent gray zones and exposure!....top marks!
Carlos
 
Avatar bradyscott

 06/09/07 @620

Wonderful color. Simple beautiful shot.
 
Avatar folo

 06/09/07 @650

i like this. i like it a lot.
10
 
Avatar Simbel

 06/09/07 @752

really amazing!!!
 
Avatar Daykan

 06/09/07 @821

I cant´believe this!
PERFECT!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 06/09/07 @827

An exellent IR shot!
Nothing more to add!
Top marks of course Rush!
 
Avatar dakoo

 06/09/07 @902

Thnx a lot guys !! I am actually surprised that this shot is so warmly received, though i preferred my last shot to this ! I am not complaining !!! ;)
quote:

It should be forbidden posting such shots without attaching a full version.
Now that is Frank & harsh on me :p !! Uploaded a destop version 1280 px wide for you Mario & zaclab !!
 
Avatar ViolentContact

 06/10/07 @966

a harsh critique for this?! :o You ask for the impossible man. This is superb stuff, everything is perfect. +10
Thanks for the desktop version... I'm definately downloading it :)
 
Avatar Slapo

 06/10/07 @038

There are just 2 things make me think about making something different and those would be:
1. The big cloud behind the tree. It makes for a good eye catcher, but I do think it would work better for a photo in colour than for one I IR. The reason would be that the tree almost blends with the cloud in some areas and isn't quite that obvious to the eye anymore, it's the cloud instead (although it does make it look as if it were a part of the tree in a way, I think it actually draws attention from it and I'm not sure that was intended - was it?)
2. As most people read from left to right, it would be more natural if something like the big tree that's on the left were on the right at the end of the road, now it seems to lead from it to nowhere and thus makes the eye go away from the subject(?).

Anyway, it does look good, it's just the things above the seem a bit quirky to me.
Nice clouds :)
 
Avatar dakoo

 06/10/07 @210

Hey Peter now that is the kind of C&C i am looking for.. thnx man :)!!!

1. About the tree : Its more of an experiment. The 2nd time i tried such a thing (both times in IR :), but i can see your color version point,will keep that in mind ). other one A manGo tree beneath the hill !! by Elite dakoo
When i used it i was looking for a more similar shape of both the elements. Now as you can see the tree & cloud lines go similar in most of places. And while parts of it do get overlapped. I think that both elements are most dominating on the scene. And hence get compared by the eye. This also help let the eye judge relative size OR depth (as in A manGo tree beneath the hill !! by Elite dakoo ).
Here it makes the Big cloud TOWER on the composition.

About isolating both from each other. I guess the key is Sharpness, But as you pointed out when doing non IR it could also be Color. hmmn :) !!

Anyway its just a way i was experimenting !! Don't know if it work that way for everyone. As you are the only one who mentioned it :) !!!


2. Well I agree that maybe the 'leading to' option should be worked on !! As for this shot i was hoping that it lead to the 2 trees in the lower right corner (though they aren't too interesting subjects) ! Thus also helping judge depth, the pathway i was skeptical if would come out well after IR processing !!
With 2 dominant element overlapping each other & most of the composition. It would be hard to place them on the right. And find another gateway into the scene. Though i will remember if i come across something where ur suggestion can be included. (Now Thnx again here...)
Its for the same reason the 'flip it' suggestion though gr8 didn't work.

Also I think reason it works here is similar to the reason as it works in centered composition at times. After having compared with other lesser shapes. Depth can be judged & then the eye returns to the main subject. Again its just my opinion. Thats why i am surprised that its working for so many ppl, but it could be the IR & not the composition.

Just a last time thnx Peter :p !! I think having such discussions really help ! Specially for ppl like me who have no ART background ! Please feel free to do it on any of my submissions.
 
Avatar moserArtist

 06/10/07 @300

Rush, you are really analyzing this to its full extent... LOL :p

Edit: Of course I did not read all that bullshit LOL ;)
 
Avatar MertAcar

 06/10/07 @349

This is just PERFECT! Well done Dakoo:) +10
Mert
 
Avatar dakoo

 06/10/07 @357

@ PAT : LOL !!! Well only since U won't PAT !!!! :p
BTW I can't really imagine that U actually read it !!
 
Avatar fumera

 06/10/07 @376

HA thanks rushi. The structures even in the gras are phenomenal
 
Avatar MrBlue

 06/10/07 @406

You want frank / harsh?

Well, frank I can give you: I like the mood, they way the contrast and coloring worked out.
I like the sense of depth and especially the clouds.

Harsh? Sorry, can't do that here. :)

+10
 
Avatar Slapo

 06/10/07 @490

You're welcome :)
Good points there.
I think it might be worth doing a half-colour, half-IR version next time in a similar case. If you use an IR filter, not a tweaked dslr (although there should be a filter workaround in that case as well). it would probably have to go in the photo manipulation section, though... or maybe not, since hdr passes with ease.
It's not like I'd have any real artistic background, but sometimes I like to analyse stuff :p
Btw., the big version look better, for some reason.
 
Avatar bheeshoom

 06/10/07 @539

super rocking
 
Avatar padrino

 06/10/07 @594

wonderful ! top marks !

erdi
 
Avatar Freiz

 06/10/07 @957

Very beautiful, sharp image! I love how stark that tree on the left looks, though I almost feel like there could be a little more space on the bottom.
 
sanchospencer

 06/11/07 @045

wowzers!! that's awesome! Seen some really great IR shots recently and this is defo up with the best of em. that sky has such power!
 
Avatar danheacock

 06/11/07 @187

Rushi, you are putting me to shame! Haha, you need to teach me all of the IR secrets. I don't think I can really add anymore to what has already been said...so I'll just say....awesome work!
 
Avatar eshine

 06/11/07 @197

Wow!!! I LOVE the blue-ish hue to this image, and honestly, my own opinion is I cannot see anything that would greatly improve this image! :)
 
Avatar Martin777

 06/11/07 @219

Fantastic IR. Great atmosphere. 9/9
 
Avatar ersen-t

 06/11/07 @547

amazing.
great colors.
 
Avatar Hybridos

 06/11/07 @678

Love it
 
Avatar Wallace

 06/11/07 @904

Looks fantastic Rushi!

The composition is a beauty

+ 10
 
Avatar Jafus

 06/12/07 @088

Perfect +9
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 06/12/07 @393

Fantastic image. It is a tiny bit tight on the bottom, could do with a little more grass.
And now the mad suggestion ! :) The big cloud on the left, was it moving ? if it was moving into the empty area on the right I would have taken this shot and waited ! In fairness this suggestion is something most members here would not do ! But I think your work is so good it might be something to consider, but always grab the first shot before waiting in case things get worst not better !!

Its an amazing image and are real ELITE image !
 
Avatar kuhta

 06/12/07 @405

OMG ! what a great capture !!! beatiful picture ! :):)
 
Avatar lawder

 06/12/07 @560

OMFG!! A wonderfull shot!! Congrats!!
 
suhasdesale

 06/12/07 @820

its a very simple composition . little bright grass at the bottom .
Fine lite tree ... and clouds shining brightly in front of dark blue sky ....
the colours r not real . so it sparcles a feel of been unreal .like a dream ...
the foto gives u a touch of calm .
thts all to say about it ...!!!
 
Avatar killadore

 06/13/07 @626

well this is way above my skill level, so i'm just admiring it and can't find anything to crit. it's a very beautiful shot, very atmospheric with a great composition
+10
 
Avatar aniocean

 06/13/07 @633

Fantastic shot!!!! 7/7
 
Avatar Azurite

 06/13/07 @668

You want harsh crits, huh? Well, you're not getting any from me either. Sorry, this shot is just too good. For a while there was quite a few IR shots posted here and not all of them really took advantage of the benefits of IR. I think this one does it beautifully. It's a stunning image!

If I'd mention something it would be that the placement of the cloud in relation to the tree is not optimal. I didn't read through all comments but I think someone mentioned this already.

I think I have to follow up more on your stuff Rushi, I've been missing out for a while, and you've obviously been working!
 
Avatar buzzz3d

 06/13/07 @921

Wow, I love this. recognized it immediately as an IR from the thumb.
+9(9)
 
Avatar Glax

 06/13/07 @951

Fantastic mood!
Simply wonderful!
 
Avatar cold

 06/14/07 @295

Good mood, superb color work!
 
Avatar anastasia

 06/14/07 @377

Very very beautiful Rushi. Everything looks great. Top marks!
 
Avatar Jenna20

 06/14/07 @871

Very nice!I had to put it on my desktop right away :)
 
Avatar Horror957

 06/15/07 @679

Maybe it's just me, but it seems that you have a lot of wasted space in the upper right-hand corner. Your eye goes straight to the tree to start, the cloud brings your eye up the page, then you follow the smaller clouds down a little and to the right. At the edge of the page the trees bring your eye down to the grass, and the shadow moves you right back to the tree. Unless I give a conscious effort, my eyes don't seem to want to go into the upper right-hand corner.

Other than that, I think it's a beautiful shot
 
Avatar dakoo

 06/15/07 @706

Agree Horror 957, but then
1. How could have i used that space ? :p
2. Is it really necessary that all of the space be utilized,
Every composition will have -ve space to let the other elements come to fore... !! Besides the corner has blue. which is allowing the whites to stand out !!! ;)
 
Avatar Cigaro

 06/17/07 @790

Harsh crit you say?
well, as previously mentioned, you need more space at the bottom. dont try to bring up the excuse that you needed to include the upper part too. since its an infrared you probably took the shot with a tripod and it would have been easy to do a panorama with a tripod:p

Anyway imo this is your best IR to date. really nice focus on those clouds
 
Avatar BillCorbett

 06/18/07 @473

It's not easy to be harsh, but I see little point of being so in this case :)
 
Avatar trs

 06/21/07 @234

Awesome IR shot. Compo is great. I think the top could be cropped a little past the cloud to focus the audiences view, but thats just my taste. Great work!
 
Avatar Mark7th

 06/22/07 @921

Amazing shot!!! The sky looks impressive... +8/8
 
Avatar yvy

 06/23/07 @763

simply beautiful
 
Avatar Gavade

 06/25/07 @909

Very Narnia! Like the composition, the tree is nicely framed by the cloud . . . .
 
Avatar ceogar

 06/26/07 @194

Love this types of pictures, beautiful setting
 
Avatar MISIL

 06/29/07 @925

Great colors, great job :)
 
Avatar piscesking

 07/02/07 @019

Beautiful..............................


+10
 
Avatar maytree

 07/02/07 @506

i like your IR shots. the cloud behind the tree is interesting. In my opinion there should be a little bit more of the meadow at the bottom.
regards
m
 
Avatar lichtstille

 07/12/07 @533

perfect
 
Avatar SerAKIN

 07/28/07 @415

i tried IR at b&w..but i didn't take good results in sharpen..but your is so succesfull..also i like the composition..very well work Rushi..
 
Avatar LoStSidE

 08/04/07 @978

amazing as usual :) +10
 
Avatar oldskool87

 08/04/07 @097

beautiful... great composition... love the IR colors... well done :)
 
Avatar nelsondepaula

 08/05/07 @685

Just beautiful!!!
 
Avatar starqueen

 08/16/07 @947

I saw your invitation to critique harshly and I got so excited! I was all riled up! Then I saw it and

...I really have nothing to critique....

...+10 .....

.... :(
 
Avatar blackshad

 08/17/07 @981

you are a sadistic dude :p
you knew there was nothing to critic so you had to ask for harsh critique heh? :)p
well its wort +10 and thats all we can say.... excellent work :)
this is pro quality
 
Avatar HuseyinKARA

 08/18/07 @886

Wow !!

Very very...very good work :)

;)
 
Avatar dennisdesigns

 08/20/07 @508

Awesome IR photography! Superb! 7/7

You may want to check out this IR specialist: http://www.treklens.com/members/musin1002/

Cheers!
 
Avatar cubicex

 09/09/07 @477

i like this contrast how you do that............cooll
 
Avatar Ryen

 09/11/07 @414

Perfect Dakoo. Beautiful scene.
Love the colors, the composition... Everything.

10+/10.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 10/09/07 @018

Beautiful IR! With so many ways to edit the colours, I like your minimalistic choice.
 
Avatar aiscape

 10/18/07 @967

Excellent.
 
Avatar arithma

 10/18/07 @716

the IR colors are just so beautiful!! :)
 
Avatar mamoun

 10/19/07 @996

WOW !!!!
Excellent
 
Avatar ZedoCaixao

 01/10/08 @686

Really beautiful capture Rushi.
The sky is great!
+10
 
Avatar dogg57

 01/26/08 @680

Love the detail in the clouds!Great IR shot!
 
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